I found this book, like the first one,
overly complicated when combined with the main character’s intuitive
leaps. One or the other I can handle, but there is just too much of it
to make this an enjoyable read. I often found myself drifting along with
the narrative because I didn’t care too much about what the characters
were doing. It could simply be the style of writing, which is more of a
noir detective, and which I don’t really care for. The clues, along with
the lengths the character was willing to go to collecting them, were at
times tedious, at times brilliant. The climax of the story was well
done, even though I only figured out a couple of the many loose ends
that were tied up. Although I understand the reasoning behind the Modhri
being nervous about what Compton can do, he should have easily been
killed so many times –I don’t buy the number of chances he got, from all
around. In the end, this was the second take-it-or-leave-it book in this
series for me. I hope the next one is more to my liking.
Spoiler review:
I went with the flow for much of this book, looking for clues, but not
trying to figure out the main character’s twisted logic or activities.
Much like Bayta, I had to be told and explained what was going on. So
many times Compton would do something that made no sense, only to be
validated by the story afterwards. It didn’t flow naturally, even though
murder mysteries are not all that familiar to me.
Additionally,
the Modhri gave Compton way too many chances. As did Morse and the
Spiders. Is it always because of what happened at the end of
Night Train to Rigel? The train
disappeared, and nobody except Compton and Bayta know what happened, but
is that worth all the Modhri’s caution? I guess so, from the story’s
perspective.
As this book starts, Compton is witness to the
aftermath of a murder. I knew that Daniel Mice was going to be just a
partial word, but I didn’t expect it to be Daniel “my son”, which was a
neat twist. Detective Morse, of the European security services, happens
by, and he doesn’t like Compton for some unknown reason, so finds him
guilty of the murder, even with the lack of evidence. Morse is angry
through the rest of the book, though at times he gives Compton grudging
respect.
Bayta doesn’t have much to do in this book, except get
jealous as Compton woos a female lead, and asks the Spiders for favors.
She’s there more so we the readers can be told what’s happening, and why
Compton thinks the way he does, often without any justification.
Neither of them want stragglers, much less ones that they might have
to explain the threat of the Modhri. But Morse hangs around, and when
they save him from walkers, he ends up in the hospital so Compton can
read his information on the case. It turns out the murdered man was
looking for the third Lynx, a collectible artefact left over from the
last Mohdri war. The pieces come in threes, with a Hawk, Lynx and Viper
as the different parts. Together, they eventually find out, these can
create a powerful weapon that can be camouflaged from sensors, even the
ones the Spiders have. So it’s imperative that the Modhri doesn’t get
one. It turns out that he already has two complete sets.
The
main suspect in the theft of the third Lynx is Stafford, whom they track
down by way of his girlfriend Penny. This is when Bayta starts getting
jealous, because she doesn’t know how to read human emotions or
reciprocate them. It turns out, though, that Compton was a victim of a
Modhri thought virus when he kissed Penny, so everything returns back to
normal at the end.
They track Stafford across the Quadrail
system, which is where the author shines, giving enough information
about the different species, some of which are passengers, others thugs
(like the Halka Gargantuan that keeps showing up). I don’t understand
why the Modhri put up with so many changes in plan, even if he was
afraid of Compton. He was tricked, cheated and manipulated all
throughout, and always acquiesced. At some point, his patience had to
break, but it didn’t until the very end.
Stafford is on an
artist planet, doing clay work and trying to stay out of the spotlight.
Compton’s Bellidic friend Fayr is there also. Compton’s logic about
Stafford didn’t make sense to me at all, but this was at a point where
much of the story was getting too complicated and I didn’t try to
understand everything, or all the characters. But he’s there, and Fayr
gets them out of trouble, even though Penny and Morse are captured. They
rescue Stafford, keep Fayr anonymous, and cause illogical distractions
to keep eyes away from Stafford. I have trouble believing that even the
Spiders would allow Compton to run around with a gun, but maybe I was
confused about where the distraction took place.
Compton
reasons, as the reader must, that Morse is a walker, but his attitude
suggests that the coral polyps must be in deep cover, because they even
work against the Modhri at times. He flies a speeder to crash into an
attack on Fayr at the end, preventing the Modhri from obtaining the
pieces. In the end, Compton makes Garantuan so angry that the telepathic
link causes the power sections of the devices to explode, even the
underground and undiscovered ones. The devices are now useless –they
would have been invisible bombs, even to the sensors of the spiders,
allowing Modhri to hold the Quadrail system hostage.
I suppose
the secret must come out eventually about the Quadrail, but I can’t say
that I fully understand it, either. How would the truth about the
central line allow any species to realize that they could build their
own warships? Maybe because those ships could use the central line, too?
After all, the planet with the devices that Compton made explode
also housed spaceships, buried for millennia, and Compton wants to keep
those secret, too. We’ll see what happens in the next books. So far, I’m
less than impressed.