A well-made mystery that is revealed through the use of time jumps,
where the main character learns all sorts of secrets that he didn’t know
about himself and his family. The romance between the two main
characters, especially in the past, was fun, but frustrating, as he
didn’t know how far he should push it. The teenaged language might be
realistic, but was the most irritating part of the book, all throughout.
Even if it’s less realistic, I prefer classical speech, even from my
teen characters, like what’s written in Hunger Games or
Divergent. Other
than that, the real delight is in the time travel, as Jackson tries to
unravel what’s happening to himself, and who his father really is, and
we follow along.
Spoiler review:
I’m a big time travel fan, so when the main character started hopping
back and forth, and experimenting with it, I was quite intrigued. Then
there came the people trying to kill him. The fact that his father
adopted him, though he came from his enemies, wasn’t very surprising.
The mystery of the Tempest and its enemies was strangely the least
interesting part of the story, but it was necessary to get an element of
danger involved. I think the romance between Jackson and the younger
Holly was much more interesting, though his restraint due to indecision
was frustrating. Not wanting to hurt Holly is a great sentiment, but she
wanted to get involved with him, and so it would have been nice to see
how their romance could have turned out. Of course, it would have been
equally interesting to see older Holly’s reaction when he told her how
he took advantage of her…
The screaming at his father and teen
tantrums were forgettable, as was much of the teen language, which felt
forced and at some points became more difficult to read.
Eventually, Jackson gets enough hints that he can piece together a
history of what happened to his life, and how he had the time traveling
gene because he was born from one of the time travelers -but who they
are and what they want or stand for is so far unclear. Jackson comes to
understand his foster father better, and how his sister Courtney’s death
affected him, as well as his feelings for Holly. He’s matured through
the book, and by the end, he’s quite the likable guy.
Adam is a
necessary best friend in all timelines, and is the first to learn about
time travel in all timelines. As a scientific type myself, I enjoyed his
reasoning, and the way he viewed Jackson’s relationship with Holly.
By the end of the book, Jackson has joined his father’s
organization, and has to cut his relationship with Holly as a result,
though I doubt this will keep her safe, since his enemies know how much
he cares for her.