I liked the concept of the aliens and
what they did to the world. The book, however, didn’t have the impact
that the previous two did, and the ending left me feeling that not
everything should be as peaceful as it’s depicted.
Spoiler review:
This book, the
third in the trilogy, goes by really fast. When it reached the end, I
was surprised, though it reaches a proper conclusion and wouldn’t have
much more to tell. It just seemed short compared to the two previous
installments. As with the first two installments, I read this book as a
final draft, but I don’t expect that it changed much afterwards.
In general, I found the first few chapters to be weaker than in the
previous books. I believe this is due to the large amount of discussion
that takes place. It is quick and snappy, but there is little else
happening except the discussion. At this point, the plot needs lots of
exposition, which is fine. But rather than the small details that I
remember from the first book, as people did stuff while talking, here
the first chapters are almost just talking. Once the caravan gets on the
road, this seems to improve.
The biggest draw from the first
book, for me at least, was that Cory had internal struggles about what
to do. This book doesn’t cover these kinds of struggles. For example,
when Cory is alone observing the spheres in chapter 1, the narration
describes what he does, but not what he is thinking. When he was alone
in No Time to Scream, however, the internal struggles were the most
intriguing parts. Now he knows better what he needs to do, so there is
less internal struggle, but we are not privy to many of his thoughts
during that time. I liked better the sequence when he was alone after
Rob was shot, as he did have a little more internalization, worrying
about what Shannon would think, knowing that she would come out to find
him.
The dialog carries most of the story, often without a break
to give us the thoughts of the point-of-view character. When the
characters are doing something, like moving around, driving,
administering medical care, etc…, the flow gets easier, as the dialog is
interspersed with descriptions. But when discussions are between various
members of the group, I think it needs more internalization.
The
story picks up seconds after No Time To Waste ends, with Cory and
Shannon in the building at the edge of the city, where Cory sees the
spheres returning. There is an overall plot where Shannon feels
completely hysterical when she is not near Cory, which I found a little
annoying, but given that he is the chosen instrument for the rebuilding
of humanity, I guess it could be the influence of the spheres acting
out.
Shannon has turned into a strong character, who tempers Cory
often through the novel. As the novels (books 2 and 3) go on, she defers
to him less and less, becoming a leader in her own way. Yes, she still
gets them more coffee than they get her, but it is more in the nature of
a person supporting a leader, though sometimes it still comes across
more as a woman serving a man. That has been a problem permeating this
trilogy, though it is a lot less prevalent in book three.
Sex
between Cory and Shannon was vaguely hinted at in book 2, where at first
he couldn’t look at her coming out of the shower, and by the end they
were talking easily as she stepped out. Here it sometimes continues to
be vague (one chapter starts with the idea that morning came earlier
than expected, and implies it was because they were making love), but
eventually it comes out in Shannon’s desire to have children and her
attempt to forcibly seduce Cory.
I think the idea of an alien
species that harvests innocuous stuff from various planets, but which
turns out to be accidentally deadly on Earth, is great! That they are
willing to sacrifice millions of their own species to correct the
mistake shows how much remorse they feel. The explanation scenes were
kept interesting enough, even though they had to kill people in order to
do it. The one-way transfer was inefficient, but presumably the sparks
could listen in on what people were saying; otherwise it would be very
difficult to figure out who to influence and how. I really wish the
author had chosen a different name for the WE. It sounds silly and is
strange to read.
The return of the spheres seems ominous when we
realize that they are destroying all of the buildings in Toronto and
surrounding areas, as well as trying to force the survivors to move
west. There is also an ominous tone around the fact that nobody except
Cory considers the spheres to be a threat. The sparks (the WE) have
altered people’s minds, including Shannon and Kai. But it turns out that
they are benevolent, and will only allow “good” people to survive,
something that Cory has already done in this group. The reason they’ve
done this is because they’ve set up a shelter in Windsor with nice
houses fully stocked with supplies, and they want Cory to start leading
the people there to restart humanity.
The morality of the WE is
very close to our own, but how do they interpret shades of grey? Good vs
bad? They consider selfish to be bad, but many of Rob’s or Cory’s
actions could be considered selfish. Cory asks the question of why he
wasn’t labeled as “bad” when he shot the new people after meeting with
the WE, even if it was in pre-emptive self-defence. That question is
never answered. It’s worth considering that somebody that the WE
consider to be bad (or even somebody who Cory would consider to be bad)
might be good for the group in the long term. I don’t think it is really
mentioned as a possibility. The closest is the character who starts
having a nervous breakdown as the end of their journey approaches, but
most everybody else takes it all in stride. Nobody mentions that humans
don’t like to be safe. They like to ride motorcycles without helmets,
and jump out of airplanes, take dares to walk along house roofs, and do
other things that are dangerous. Being safe is good for the survival of
humanity, at least at first. But in order to innovate, humans need to
break through barriers.
I liked the way the energy ray that turns
things to dust, as well as the devices that they were forcing humans to
build, are consistent with what the sparks do here, as they learn more
about humanity. In No Time to Scream, it looks like they are eliminating
hiding places and honing in on radios for nefarious purposes, when
actually they are creating safe places and trying to find humans they
can transfer to in order to help. The device they were trying to build
was meant to try and revive the dead humans? By the time they started
building it, it seems like the bodies were already decomposing. Yuck!
I also found it interesting that the sparks can interpret drawings
of stick people, roads, trees and buildings, that cannot look anything
like the real thing, as they are drawn by people who have not had a
career in realistic impressionism. It seemed unlikely, and could have
used an explanation.
Did the sparks save a lot of books from the
libraries where they got all of their information? Or did they just
transfer the knowledge to the children and then turn the libraries to
dust? I hope they brought the books to Windsor, which is the location
they’d prepared for the renaissance of humanity. The bridge to Detroit
was ominous, but it was never made clear if they could see skyscrapers-
was the city still standing, when Toronto had been turned to dust? Maybe
it’s a link where people can come from the South to Windsor.
There is a new female character in this book, as Cory turns back toward
Toronto to do some surveillance. I quite liked the angry Pen, who worked
with Cory to save Rob’s life. Other than her anger, though, after being
raped off-screen she shows no other ill-effects from her experience, and
even warms up to Arthur quickly, which I believe is unusual for a rape
victim. The turnaround seems too quick and is not really explained. I
enjoyed her character, so was a little disappointed that she disappeared
for so much of the middle of the book, though she wasn’t particularly
needed. She was a good foil for Cory at that point, too, as she started
spending more time with Arthur. After abating for most of No Time to
Waste, and hardly appearing in the first half of this book, Cory’s
resentment of his father resurfaces, seemingly out of nowhere. My guess
is that it’s because the end of their journey is approaching, and he’s
afraid that his father will try to take control again.
By the end
of the book, there are potential threats that are never explained
(perhaps fuel for more stories), but the spheres have left, meaning that
Cory and Rob will have to fend for themselves. I wonder if the society
they are building will outgrow them? They did a good job in No Time to
Waste, but now the group is getting larger. It will be interesting to
see how it grows.
The author notes in his “about the author”
blurb that he’s continuing to explore these characters and their
relationship. Rob, Cory and Shannon are strong characters with a lot to
offer, and I really look forward to reading more about them.