-- First reading (ebook)
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I really liked the way the author built up the suspense of training a crew that at first seemed incompetent, but then was found to be held in fear, with a few bad apples who enjoyed the reign of terror brought on by the previous captain. Dunmoore takes on each problem in turn, showing her true military colors and her just over-the-edge persona, which nearly drives them all to destruction. I really liked the way she beat it all down with her patience, revealing the conspiracy through the clues presented by the various crew members. I had a problem with the author’s style at the beginning, wondering why he called his main character by her full name in almost every sentence, but that died down later, when he just called her Dunmoore. Flipping between points of view mid-paragraph was also jarring, but I got used to that, though never warmed to the concept. The concept of the human confederation and ships seemed modeled after Star Trek, which I found a bit unoriginal, and the aliens were just pseudo-human, with a bit of a Klingon bend to them. I would have liked to see something more alien. In all, though, a success, and I’m looking forward to the next book in the series. Spoiler review:
The political plot of the pampered and smuggling former captain was in
the background for the entire book, from having been a rival to Dunmoore
in school to the secrets and threats she hung over all their heads for
the duration of the voyage. I admire the way Dunmoore tried to keep cool
about it, even knowing that everyone wasn’t telling her things. The
other points of view helped in the suspense, as the problem was hinted
at but never explicitly stated until Dunmoore pried open the cracks.
Seeing the second-in-command having doubt about his ability really
helped in this, as he had aspirations until he was ostracized by the
former captain. I had a feeling that the big spy would be the petty
officer, because she was so nice and chipper, compared with the rest of
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