What was that? The first chapter, with a computer that gets repaired
because it told the truth, piqued my interest. The rest of the story has
nothing at all to do with that computer, the third part is completely
disconnected from the earlier parts, and the last couple of chapters
seem like they belong in the middle of the book. In all, this book was
completely messed up, in the way it was put together and the story it
tried to tell. The character who gets hit by the LSD dart seems like an
excuse for the author to write while stoned. The middle part, which
seems to have been added at a later date, is completely
incomprehensible. When things calm down a bit, the author hit on
something with the paraworlds, which resemble alternate dimensions, and
can be accessed through a change in mind state. Unfortunately, the idea
wasn’t expanded sufficiently (outside the hallucinations), and wouldn’t
have been enough to save this book. I know that PDK writes strange
stuff, but this was beyond that. I can’t recommend this at all.
Spoiler review:
This story was messed up, in every way possible. While the first chapter
in the book seemed to promise a computer that lied all the time,
possibly sending out mind-controlling messages similar to 1984, the
result of those lies left me completely baffled. What was the truth that
caused Rachmael ben Applebaum to think he was a rat, with rat thoughts
and rat dreams? I have no idea.
Seemingly disconnected, Rachmael
goes into space to confront the head of Lies, Incorporated (Listening
Instructional Educational Services), Matson Glazer-Holliday and his
mistress Freya Holm. He owes big debts, but wants to keep his prize
spaceship free of the debtors, and he wants Lies to provide a pilot to
keep it moving around the solar system for him, until he gets a final
piece.
The beginning of this book was written not long after
World War II, and I imagine the author saw so many of the Nazis going
free, and worried that the cycle would start all over again. The world
is described as being owned by the Germans, who reunited their country
and silently took over the UN, which rules the world. Rachmael and
Matson think the wormhole travel that put Applebaum industries out of
business is a scam, and that the travel is either one way (the best
scenario) where people are being used as slaves, or it’s really an
atomizer, taking over from the gas machines that were shut down after
the war, and people go into them willingly, reducing overpopulation.
There’s a scene where the Liles pilot Dosker picks up Rachmael but
they get captured by Thodoric Ferry, owner of THL, owner of the wormhole
technology and whom he believes controls Whale’s Mouth, the alien
planet. Thanks to Dosker, they escape, but Rachmael can’t get the part
to his cryo-sleep chamber, and ends up on his ship alone, ready to take
an eighteen year journey to Whale’s Mouth.
A chapter later,
Rachmael is on Terra and going through the wormhole machine. What
happened? He’s chasing after Freya, pretending to be Matson, and gets
hit by an LSD dart. The next part of the book, almost half of it, is
completely incomprehensible. A fish-like creature, paraworlds
(essentially multiverse), a support group for those who can’t see the
paraworlds, hallucinations, and an encounter with a being that turns out
to be Matson’s half-alien child, before it’s killed. Huh?
The
next part, where THL is at war with the UN (which seems to be good now,
not necessarily German-controlled, but it’s not clear, because that
reverts back at the end), is just as messed up. One character seems to
be in a time-dilation tank while others talk to him from normal space
–he then gets distracted and thinks about something in the past, and
never seems to come back.
Meanwhile, Freya finds Rachmael but
they go their separate ways. They each get to look into a book written
in the near future, which tells of what will happen to them shortly. And
it does… Rachmael doesn’t get much out of it, but Freya discovers that
Ferry, the owner of THL, is actually an alien, and that he infiltrated
Terra fifteen years earlier. She tries to go back to Terra but is caught
(in a reasonably scripted fight scene), and is abandoned in the
shuttlecraft, where she leaps to safety on Ferry’s ship. She confronts
him, and it’s not clear if she get to kill him, or if it was an avatar.
Then Rachmael learns her fate and decides to open the UN weapon.
I assume it either destroyed Whale’s Mouth or turned back time sending
information back, because we end up in the missing section of the novel,
where Freya is convinced to send herself and Matson across the wormhole,
Dosker is captured by the UN and brought to see the secretary general,
and we see Rachmael’s return after the failed mission across
interstellar space, in which he’s told to go to Whale’s Mouth by
wormhole.
I realize that this was written in parts for a pulp SF
magazine, but even those parts are not coherent even among themselves.
The entire book was a disaster. There were a couple of things that
piqued my interest, like the paraworlds, the wormhole, and the aircars,
but they were scattered, and didn’t make sense in context of the story.
Not worth the effort of reading.