I had mixed feelings about this book. In one sense, it felt very
archaic, like a true ‘80s novel (which it basically is), with the
nuclear war and the national squabbling even as they tried to take the
Stone for themselves. On the other hand, it was supposed to hold a sense
of wonder at the majesty of everything, similar to
Ringworld (which did it very boring) and
Rendezvous with Rama (which I
loved). The wonder was done well, though what little plot there was
didn’t hold me, unfortunately. I didn’t care either way for Patricia or
Lanier or the other characters, and I was annoyed by Mirsky, who I guess
at least gave me some sort of reaction. The third part of the novel gave
us a plausible future-world view, with personality partials and
holograms and living computer viruses and all that other cool stuff. But
it reminded me of the much cooler future world of Peter F. Hamilton in
The Dreaming Void. And that’s the main
problem, I think –I spent most of my time reading it either being
uninterested (the national squabbles or the stupid decisions that led to
war) or comparing it to other books, where it was done better (or
worse). I found the Stone itself, and the Way, to be interesting, but
the political bickering not so much, from Russian/American and even to
Naderite/Geshel. I was hoping for a more interesting plot to accompany
the wonder of the surroundings.
Spoiler review:
Almost from the beginning, I was hoping this novel wouldn’t be another
Ringworld, especially given the super-boring
plot of the prequel, Legacy. Olmy is back here,
but doesn’t have a part until the last third of the book, which is an
interesting choice. Fortunately, the characters were a lot more
interesting than in Ringworld, and the situation didn’t call for
traveling all over the Stone as if it was Gulliver’s Travels. Of course,
that’s not saying much, because here the characters were window
dressing.
Patricia seemed like she would be an interesting
character, trying to figure out the impossible mathematical principles
involved in a chamber that goes on forever. Even after the whole book, I
don’t understand what it is or how somebody could intentionally try to
create it or “connect” it to the asteroid. Unfortunately, after the
wonder she expressed in seeing the interior of the Stone, she became as
emotionally barren as the others who had been there for up to two years.
She’s somewhat attracted to the head of the expedition, Lanier, as
apparently all the women are, but he is shown to be emotionally barren
as well, even when having sex.
There are three instances of
sexual activity in this book, and they are ridiculously bereft of all
emotion. Lanier’s prostitute, then Karen when he just needs to get a
release, and finally with Patricia, when she needs a release. It was the
most boring sexual encounters I’ve read, and should have just cut to the
next scene.
The Americans got to the Stone first, and made a
complete mess of things, even given the tensions with the Soviet Union.
I interchanged USSR with Russians, as the author did often enough, so
that particular error in future history didn’t bother me, except that it
was so typical and unimaginative. The Americans have restricted access
to the Stone to American allies, with a small team of Chinese and a
smaller team of Russians, who have even lower access than anybody else.
They’ve found historical documents outlining the end of the world before
humanity rose again and made for the stars, creating the Stone out of an
asteroid and creating the Way, which holds gates to other worlds.
But the Americans being paranoid that Russia will do something
stupid with the information –like maybe avoid a war- don’t even hint at
the books available in the Libraries, making the Russians suspicious,
and due to that suspicion, they instigate the war that the future
histories tell of. It’s made to sound like an impossible circle, but the
traitor did the right thing in leaking the information –he just didn’t
leak enough of it. If the Russians knew they could destroy the world,
would they?
It seems so, because after the awe and science of the
first third of the book, which was getting boring anyway, the second
half increases tensions with the Russians because of lack of access to
the Stone. The Americans smuggle anti-ship weapons to the Stone, while
the Russians launch a sneak attack. Although well told, with an
interesting strategy, this third of the book held little interest for
me, and completely derailed the plot I thought could have been
interesting if they’d continued with it –Patricia’s. But war is one way
to spice things up.
At first, I was very much annoyed with the
Russian Mirsky, but he grew on me after the war ground to a stalemate,
with nuclear warheads dropped on most of Earth, surrounding it in the
Death foretold by the library books (the author seems to like destroying
the world, as he did this in Forge of God
as well). I liked it when he turned from a blind leader into a free
thinker, dismissing the political officers and their desire to make a
Communist bloc in their part of the Stone. He goes to the Library, where
he sits down in those really cool chairs to learn more languages and the
history of the world that wasn’t ours, but we ended up following the
alternate reality to oblivion anyway. And he comes out of it feeling
like he just wants to get away from it all.
He doesn’t get that
chance, though, as he is rounded up with all the other residents by a
conspiracy among the people of the Way. It turns out that the Americans
didn’t go far enough down the Corridor –they had to go more than a
million miles before they would find Axis City; they hadn’t even gone
close before the Russians attacked.
Patricia, being observed by
an invisible Olmy since she arrived, is taken first, and learns to adapt
to the futuristic society very quickly. She apparently has a presence of
spirit that is required to reanimate the fractured personality of the
Engineer, who created the Way, and they think he can help in the present
crisis. For the Jarts are attacking, and will soon open a gate to the
surface of a star, which will kill all humans. Instead, the Geshels have
decided to accelerate Axis City to a third the speed of light, creating
a shock wave that will destroy all gates along its path.
And
Patricia is brought into the middle of this crisis. Lanier and three
others follow Olmy’s ship and arrive at Axis City several days after
Patricia. Where Patricia could be kept secret, the arrival of the others
cannot, and everybody learns about the humans who invaded Thistledown,
the city they found in the fourth chamber.
Here, the wonder of
the earlier part of the book takes over again, as Patricia is visited by
a Rogue personality from the Central Computer, and she sees alien
beings, and Olmy and the presiding minister can create partial
personalities with their implants. A partial personality can even
continue working while Olmy is sleeping. There’s lots of cool stuff
available, but most of it we witness in passing or as a part of life,
which is something I love about this kind of storytelling. There’s no
point in listing it all, but it was fun navigating the future world.
Unfortunately, it wasn’t as cool as other future societies I’ve
read, like The Dreaming Void (and other
Commonwealth stories), which are a lot more action-packed and maybe
built upon these ideas. It could just be that the era in which this was
written lacked a bit more imagining. Regardless, it was well-written,
but the execution left me wanting something more from it.
In the
end, while Patricia and Lanier are out visiting another planet, they
have to race back because the Geshels have started a revolution and
stolen a couple of parts of Axis City, which they take to Thistledown.
People are evacuated, while Patricia searches for a gate only she can
find. In the last millisecond, she opens the gate, as the fiery plasma
from the Jart attack overwhelms everything, and Axis City accelerates to
counter it with the shock wave.
Lanier and Olmy survive back
into the Stone, while Axis City moves out into the unknown of the Way
(where they will presumably meet the Presiding Minister, who found a
gate to an intersection in the Way much farther down). Patricia,
meanwhile, was searching for a way home, back to a version of Earth that
didn’t go into nuclear holocaust. And she does, but unfortunately it’s
one where the Egyptian Pharoahs still rule, not one where her loved ones
live. Having grown into an old woman, she still searches for that
elusive gate.
I guess that sets up the sequel. I hope it has all
the wonder of this setting, plus a more interesting story to go along
with it. I also hope the characters are a little more interesting, or at
least show more emotion. This was an in-between book because I liked
some of what was presented, but it came at the expense of other parts.