Based on my previous experience with this series, I was completely
surprised to find that I loved the intensity of the main character and
the way the story was written. It’s just too bad that the whole thing
fell apart at the climax, which threw it all away with unnecessary
mystery and poorly described action. There is hardly any dialog in this
book, and that is to its credit and I think to the author’s strength.
The interior thoughts, worries, descriptions and awe of the world she
was walking into, and her continual reassessment of her guide and his
ability, left me wanting more. No matter that there was barely any
action or conflict. The girl’s thoughts sustained most of the story.
When the action was quick, like when they found the boy, or the forest
people, it was well done, continuing the intensity of the main
character. But at the end, everything was confusing, to how she got out
of the castle, to the help she received and the spirits beyond our
comprehension. It’s too bad, too, because that takes up such a small
fraction of the entire wonderful story –but it’s the most important
part.
Spoiler review:
I went warily into this book because of what I found in
Trey of Swords.
Given that this is a box set of three, I decided it was time for a bit
of distraction. Fortunately, I was very pleasantly surprised, by a deep
and introspective main character, who treads carefully to protect her
secret, even as she relies on the Falconer to protect her.
There
isn’t much story to this book, which takes place as Tirtha hires Nirel
the Falconer without a falcon, and they cross the mountains into the
ancient lands that were destroyed by the Witches of Estcarp as they were
facing annihilation decades ago. She’s compelled to seek out the remains
of her ancient homeland, Hawkholm. On the way, she finds the boy Alon, who must
be descended from a more ancient race, and the power of the lands. They
find a dead man who seemed to be on a similar quest, and take the scroll
he was carrying, as well as his horse. Entering the forest, they are
nearly attacked by the people of the forest, until she shows the forest
king humility and kindness. The forest hides them until they get to
Hawkholm, where unfortunately the story falls completely apart.
The best parts of this book were Tirtha’s solitude and her opening up as
it progressed. Realizing that what she and Nirel faced was more than
just a quest to find an ancient artefact, but that they were walking
into danger, that there were people living here –good and bad people-
forced her to reveal parts of her quest, always keeping some parts
secret.
She uses magic salts to create a dreamlike fugue, draws
on Firel and his new falcon’s power, as well as that of Alon, to search
for meaning in her dreams. She only survives because she trusted them
with parts of her vision, as the evil that waits for them is lurking
nearby.
Tirtha had used her magic earlier to save Alon, the boy
whose fright turned him invisible. Only her dreams showed where he could
be. The sequence where she and Nirel calm him in her lap, where they
can’t see him but administer life-saving magic, was terrific.
At
some point, the falconer gets a falcon, a descendent of the ancient
breed that bonded with falconers like himself, before the Aerie was
destroyed. He is also guided to an ancient weapon, which he uses to help
Tirtha in her magic.
I could have gone on through the entire
book like this, with Tirtha’s inner thoughts, her doubts, guidance, and
sharing with the falconer and Alon, because her interior voice was
beautiful and mesmerizing. I didn’t need the danger that faced them at
the end of their quest.
Unfortunately, the quest has to amount
to something, and it’s usually a battle between the forces of good and
evil. However, like in Trey of Swords, the final battle has nothing to
do with what came before. It’s meaningless because the good and evil are
so far romoved from our realm, from Tirtha’s realm, that it’s beyond
understanding.
Tirtha knows exactly where to find the chest,
that only someone from Hawkholm can find. The bad guys of course come
after her, seriously wound the falconer, kill the falcon, but it
transforms into another kind of bird, which Tirtha feels as a protecting
force, even though her body has also died. Only her mental consciousness
hangs on, even as the bad guys bring her across country, looking for a
way to remove the chest from her body without dying, as one already did.
I lost track of the geography, even to the end.
In the cave, the
falconer reappears –it was obvious that this would happen when Alon
insisted on bringing the horses for a quick getaway. The strange bird
reappears as Nintura the good force. The evil force shows up also,
summoned by the bad guys. But so do two other protectors, each carrying
a sacred weapon that wards off the evil one. The falconer is healed, and
Tirtha’s spirit is brought back into alignment with her body. Alon, it
seems, will leave to find the remnants of his own people, I think, while
Tirtha and Nirel seem to get romantically involved.
None of the
ending was clear, which is too bad. Tirtha and the others were used as
puppets, but I don’t even know to what end. It’s too bad, because the
rest of the book was a pure joy to read.