Definitely weaker than the first installment in this series. It
progressed the story of Mare as she searches for a way to get back at
her betrayal, still coming to terms with what she can do and how people
now rely on her –or she thinks they do. The story was a little too
familiar, a mix of Mockingjay and
X-Men. I hope we get a reason why
people can do what they do, as it seems very random, unlike the Silvers,
who seem a lot more structured in their mutations. What really turned me
off in this story was the way Mare treats people, more like tools, and I
don’t believe her partial redemption near the end. Worse, though, was
all the teenage angst. It seems like every page had a paragraph that
ended with something like “Or it wasn’t”, contradicting everything she
thought in the rest of the paragraph. The text was dripping with heavy
negative emotion. Fortunately, the main climax of the book was a very
well written action sequence, which I thoroughly enjoyed, so the book
ended on a high note.
Spoiler review:
I wasn’t overly enamored with the first book in this series, but this
was a definite step down. It picks up without pause from the end of Red
Queen, and brings Mare to an island by submarine where reds have been
gathering. When she’s imprisoned there, she decides she needs to save as
many newbloods as possible, and sets off to do just that. This book is
the result of her obsession, her self-hero worship, and the price she
has to pay for liberating them –her love and her friend, not to mention
her brother (maybe more than one), and any respect she had by anybody,
including that gained at the beginning of her crusade.
Throughout, Mare’s determination hardens, but her self-doubt rises. It’s
a cycle that feeds itself, as she presses on in the wrong direction at
every turn, resulting in her belief that she and she alone can bring
Maven to justice, bring the silvers to their knees and restore equality.
Thankfully it’s mentioned by several people how she seems to want to
replace the silver empire with a red one, or to install herself and the
newbloods as the upper class. There’s good reason the Colonel doesn’t
trust her, and I think she’s proving all throughout that she can’t be
trusted to bring equality to the world. Not that the Colonel wants
equality either. He would put the silvers in chains under the heel of
the reds.
The time on the island was a little dull as Mare finds
that she has a useful skill, but nobody wants to take advantage of it,
and nobody wants to pursue the names in Julian’s book. The most
interesting part was the attempted jailbreak, where Mare proves that she
keeps trusting the wrong people. That was when it looked like Kilorn had
joined the Colonel. Too bad it was just a ruse to get the Colonel to
trust him, so he could get her out with the help of Farley and Shade,
who can teleport her to safety. As with the X-Men, I wonder how all
these mutations came to be. Some, like telepathy, have been speculated
for a long time. But how does teleportation come about?
Regardless, Cal flies them off the island in a stolen jet, and Farley
takes them to an abandoned airstrip where Mare can get to the first
person on the list. They spend much of the book finding people, and it’s
at least interesting, if long, because sometimes they are ahead of
Maven, sometimes behind, and it’s always grizzly or a trap when they are
behind him.
Unfortunately, the author doesn’t do Mare’s internal
struggle as well as Katniss was done in Mockingjay. They are both
symbols, neither side particularly wants them, but at the same time,
both sides want them. I struggled through Katniss’ PTSD in Mockingjay,
but this was a lot harder to get through. Like Katniss, Mare tries to
maintain ties with both her potential lovers, and fails them both. Cal
holds her all night (though apparently they aren’t lovers), while Kilorn
gives her the silent treatment. But he comes back to her, around the
time that Cal gets fed up with the martyr she seems to want to be. I
can’t say the love triangle was particularly interesting or compelling.
The author’s writing style doesn’t help, especially in these
moments. It’s long of detail and not much on substance. There is so much
teenage angst pouring out of the pages I felt used up at the end of
every chapter. So many paragraphs ended with a thought, then a reversal,
and maybe one of those would come to pass. Or maybe not. (Yeah, like
that…) She takes her abilities as the ultimate power, though she’s
proven wrong time and again, from Maven’s clicking device, to the
power-absorbing stones, to others whom she can’t control.
And
then they meet Jon, whose power would seem to be the ultimate. I think
of him floating like Dr. Strange, but with a wispy bottom like the
guardian of the Soul Stone, maybe with sparkles filling out the rest.
The scene is almost absurd, as he talks in riddles and confusion, the
way all people who talk about the future must, I suppose.
As
with Maven in the last book, and Kilorn and Cal in this one, she trusts
Jon right away, because his vision of a rescue of so many newbloods in
Maven’s prison aligns with her self-appointed savior complex.
Fortunately, the prison break is the best part of the book, and it
should have been the climax. They use a shapeshifter to imitate Maven
(though I don’t see how this could ever work –aren’t there passcodes to
prove he’s the King, rather than relying on sight alone? Their approach
to the prison was akin to using a tape recording of Maven’s voice to
allow them to land. What if they’d been enemies determined to destroy
the prison?)
Given the stupidity of how they got into the prison
complex, the rest was well executed. They impersonate the main guard
once he turns on them, and there’s a big firefight where the mutants get
to strut their powers. Mare even goes ballistic with some of the guards
who were about to surrender, frying them with her lightning, which is
what drives a wedge between her and Cal. Then they go on a rampage in
the cells, freeing all the reds they can, and even the silvers being
held there. They find Julian and Sara, and a bunch more who were
persecuted for speaking out against the King.
Maven’s mother
Elara catches Mare, but her newbloods rescue her, until they are chased
onto the tarmac. Outlining more of the prison’s stupidity, they didn’t
destroy the two aircraft sitting on the runway, allowing all the
newbloods to take off without chase, and without being fired upon. Elara
catches them on the tarmac, too, and starts getting into their minds,
but when Shade is killed by a bullet meant for Mare, Mare takes all her
pent up energy and throws it at the Queen, killing her.
They
bring the bodies of Shade and the Queen back to the island, where they
present them to the Colonel, and even hijack a TV broadcast (like in
Mockingjay) to show the nation.
Unfortunately, the book didn’t
end with the rescue of the prisoners. Like others, I also think it’s
stupid to allow all those silvers on the island; only Julian and Sara
have proven themselves; they should have stopped at an intermediary
point, as there’s no certainty that they will embrace the cause of the
Scarlet Guard. In fact, I’m sure most of them won’t, as they haven’t
given much thought to the injustice –it even took Cal a long time to see
their point of view.
Mare is invited to join an international
group that prioritizes newbloods, and has silvers and reds mixed
together in their society. I wonder, though, how fair and just it
actually is…
Mare unleashes her fury on the Colonel next, who
concedes to her next mission –to rescue the underaged infantry group
being sent to the war front. The jet is shot down, and they are all
captured. The book ends on another cliff-hanger, which I’m okay with, as
Mare is shown to the nation, and it’s revealed that Jon is standing at
his side, making us question whether Mare made another questionable
choice about which man to follow.
I’ll have to move on to the
next book, just to see what happens, but I hope Mare grows a sense of
reasonability, not just trying to reverse the roles of society. As she
already noted to herself, she’s broken every promise she’s ever made,
from Cal to Kilorn, and even to the newbloods when she forced Cameron,
who can suck away powers like the boy in X-Men 3, to join them on the
prison break –against her will. I guess she has to fall before she can
rise up. I hope it’s an interesting rise, because the fall was hard to
bear.