I have not had this much fun reading a Star Wars book in a long time.
It did have its faults, but I actually enjoyed getting into the mind of this
bad guy.
I have never been a big fan of bad guys. I understand all the hoopla
surrounding Boba Fett and Darth Vader, but I do not subscribe to them. I
like the good guys, and have never really been eager to get into the minds of
their enemies. Until now. This book was so much fun. It was
actually written as though I was progressing in a video game. Obstacle
encountered -perform some battle move and go on to the next challenge.
Chase people, and do what we have to do to move to the next level. For
the entire time we saw the story from Darth Maul's point of view, this is how
it went.
But the largest faults also came from Maul's point of view. They actually
start with the very first line: "Space is the perfect place to
hide." Whenever the author takes the present tense and a tone like
that, I get worried. With that kind of gesture, he is making a grand
statement that the reader is supposed to take at face value.
"Nobody could have survived that," he tells us often enough, even
though we know that our characters have survived. I think the
author is trying to show us Maul's arrogance, but it doesn't come off all that
well. He is better when he is talking about Maul's emotions, raw as they
are. I didn't think I would like getting inside Maul's head, but I
did! He is not a stock villain, as he was in the movie. He thinks
things through, remembers, and actually makes mistakes.
Maul thrives off the Dark Side of the Force. He has just recently
come off the mission of destroying Black Sun in the comics, and unbeknownst to
him, there are still a few loose ends. Actually, he never really learns
about the one loose end left over from that mission. Back in the comic,
I couldn't figure out how the assistant to Black Sun's leader was
killed. But I assumed that Maul couldn't have left him alive. And
it turns out that he did. I still maintain that someone as focused as
Maul, intent on making sure that there were no survivors, would have sensed
him, especially after Lex shouted several times "Oolth?" just before
the confrontation. But I guess that also shows one of Maul's weaknesses,
and that he is fallible, something that would lead to his death in The Phantom
Menace.
I liked the way the comics worked closely with this novel in that way,
right down to his love of decapitating people, rather than killing them some
other way. I am just glad I decided to read the comics first! There is
also a small scene right before Maul meets with the Dug vigo in the comic,
where the vigo throws out a Nemoidian named Hath Monchar for trying to
convince him that the Sith have returned. That character is the one Maul
is sent to track down and kill in this book, because he left his colleagues and wants to
sell the information about the Sith and about the Naboo blockade. The
Trade Federation viceroy doesn't tell Darth Sidious about the missing person,
but the Sith Lord knows anyway. He thinks this would be a good mission
for Darth Maul...
The characters and species that we knew from the movie behaved and sounded
just like they were in another movie. The Toydarian Zippa sounded just
like Watto (not to mention giving us a lure on a Sith Holocron)! And the
Nemoidians sounded just as cowardly and accented as they were in the
movies. The author did a perfect job at this.
Three storylines converge rather quickly from the beginning of the book,
and it leads directly into the chase that takes up most of it. We are
introduced to Lorn Pavan, a Corellian information broker with his droid
I-Five, who have business interactions with Monchar, and are now on Maul's hit
list. A bounty hunter is also hired by the Nemoidians to track down
their wayward colleagues. After a brief but gigantic battle between
Darth Maul and the bounty hunter (written really well), Monchar and the bounty hunter are dead, and
Lorn ends up with the holocron that Monchar recorded his information on.
The holocron ends up being the key, because the more people that know about
the blockade and Sith, the more Maul has to hunt them down, because we knew
right from the start that the Nemoidian couldn't survive long.
But even though Monchar and the bounty hunter (Mahwi Lihnn, for those who
are keeping track) don't survive for long, it is very refreshing to get inside
their heads, learn what they know, how they operate, and why they do the
things they do.
Maul goes through several bodyguards and ends up at the last remaining
Black Sun vigo's hideout on Coruscant, Yanth the Hutt. I really enjoyed
the battle fought there, even though it was only a short one before Yanth gets
skewered. Lorn and I-Five escape, just barely, in the confusion, but
Maul tracks them down and nearly captures them before the third storyline
intervenes.
I have trouble with the idea that Lorn immediately figures out that Maul is
a Sith. As Qui-Gon points out to Anakin, he could have acquired a
lightsaber from somebody else, and he didn't see the man fight until he
reached the Hutt's hideout. If it is so easy to deduce, why didn't the
police recognize the lightsaber strikes? It seems to me that between the
comics and the conflagrations on Coruscant that Maul creates, that the police would
come to some conclusion, and inform the Jedi, especially when Obi-Wan came
snooping around?
Oolth, the one person who knows what destroyed Black Sun, and who might
know more about Maul than anybody alive who is willing to tell, was set to be
brought to the Jedi Council, which might have aided them and made them more
prepared. Actually, because of the timeframe shown by the last chapter,
I have some trouble with this in terms of the continuity. According to
the Phantom Menace novelization, the blockade had been in effect for a month
before the Jedi were dispatched. But Qui-Gon and Obi-Wan were sent at
the end of the book, and I wonder how much Maul's mission really mattered,
now. And it seems to me that Oolth's information would be obsolete by
the time he delivered it.
Jedi Padawan Darsha Assant is sent on her Trials to bring this man back
from the Crimson Corridor on Coruscant's lower levels. Between gangs,
armored rats and hawk bats, she fails, as her lift is destroyed, and Oolth
falls to his death and is eaten by the hawk-bats! It was really
refreshing to read about Assant, as she is nowhere near a "perfect
specimen" of Jedi. She is constantly questioning herself,
constantly doubting herself, finally wondering if she was ever going to make
it to Jedi-status. She shows her resolve when she makes her way
successfully back to the Jedi Temple, and hope flares again when her master
tells her she was too impulsive when she left her charge -she should have made
sure he was really dead. So they go out and verify that Oolth actually
died, back in the Crimson Corridor.
What I still have a problem with, and it was something I could not figure
out in The Rising Force, The Phantom
Menace, and several other prequel
stories, is why the Jedi would cast Darsha out of the order if she
failed. That would leave an almost-Jedi, potentially angry at them for
rejecting her, out loose in the galaxy. If that isn't a recipe for the
Dark Side... Better they should keep her confined to the Temple, doing
research, never to have contact with the outside world. This is similar to
what Tionne, a weak Jedi at Luke's Academy, does. She fights when
necessary, but her contact with non-Jedi is miniscule. For the
untrained, like Anakin, I suppose I can see that he would not be very
dangerous. But for somebody partially trained, like young Obi-Wan, or
somebody with great potential and over a decade of training like Darsha, I
can't figure it out. She does mention being possibly assigned to the
agricultural corps, but I am still not sure what that is, or why they would
need failed Jedi to work for them...
On their way back from investigating Oolth's death, Darsha and her master
come across a peak of angry, surging Dark Force energy, and stop to rescue
Lorn and I-Five, and finally to battle Darth Maul. I liked the way
Darsha's master, Bondara, sacrificed himself for the escape of the others, and I also
liked the way Darsha failed her master again by not making his sacrifice
worthwhile. She follows the battle, intending to join in. By
blowing up Maul's speeder (I guess he needed a new one for his trip to
Tatooine...), Bondara tries to kill the Sith, but Maul survives, of
course. I-Five, the only one not knocked unconscious by the blast, takes
his two human charges down an access station into the bowels of
Coruscant.
And thus the real chase begins. Maul cannot immediately follow them,
but he does manage to track them through other access ports after he regains consciousness.
The video-game part of the book ended at that point, and it really became a
chase. I am not a fan of chases like this. Any time we get down to
the bowels of a planet, be it Coruscant (here or in others; I can't remember
other titles where we visited these areas), Nar Shadda (in The Hutt Gambit and
others), or Kasshyyk (Darkest Knight), I am never impressed. It seems to
be an excuse to give a description of the low-life that lives there, and
little more. Running through endless caverns and tunnels is not my idea
of an interesting story. But somehow, the author made the long, drawn-out chase interesting, even if it only seemed like
an excuse to make the book a little longer.
The long chase gave the "good" characters an opportunity to learn
more about each other. I could have certainly done without the growing
romance between Lorn and Darsha, but it was really interesting to find out
Lorn's reasons for hating the Jedi so much. They took his
Force-sensitive son and fired him from a Temple job, probably because Lorn was
prying and they wanted to keep any "distractions" such as family
away. In fact, this book did a good job of painting the Jedi in not so
good a light, though Darsha, being such a good person, goes a long way towards
mending that attitude. I can't believe she is so naive, though, rarely
leaving the Temple while Obi-Wan was taken all throughout the galaxy by his
master in the Jedi Apprentice series.
Maul is defeated once again by fate (or some would call it Corellian Luck,
like the luck other Corellians we know have...), as a Force-invisible creature
attacks, and he is forced to retreat until Darsha, Lorn and I-Five break the
bridge and escape to the other side of a cavern too large to jump
across. They battle against a gang again as they emerge back into
the Crimson Corridor, and manage to get up to a higher level of the
city. But Maul traced them and was there waiting for them.
Between the battle with the taozin and later, with Darth Maul, Darsha
really grew. We could follow her development all through the book,
actually. Where she was always doubting at the beginning, she became
more of a leader, taking charge of situations more and more, until she decided
to face Maul alone. As Lorn and I-Five encased themselves in carbonite
(!) she realized how much her master's sacrifice could have meant. She
is strong and clever enough to delay Maul credibly, until she rigs an
explosion from the combustibles scattered through the storeroom. Thus
Darsha is killed, but her charges survive, and Maul can't pick up any
life-signs because of the carbonite casing. This was good work all
around, but I though the book should have ended there, with Lorn going off to
another planet, retiring, and perhaps feeling guilty when the blockade
happens.
Unfortunately, but true to character and the story, Lorn goes after Maul
after "defrosting". They contact somebody who owes him a
favor, Tuden Sal, who gets them access to a vehicle. He deactivates I-Five and
tells his Sal to deliver the droid to the Jedi Temple, so that
they could be warned about the Sith. But, in a truly brave move by the
author, Sal takes off with I-Five and has his memory
wiped! Lorn chases after Maul, docking with a space station and managing
to stun Maul long enough to retrieve the holocron. Of course, if
Maul had destroyed the holocron in the first place, there would have been no
reason for the story to progress further. Lorn was carrying a scale of
the Force-invisible taozin, and was able to surprise Maul in that way.
He escapes, missing a hand, and makes his way into a chamber with Senator
Palpatine, handing him the holocron...
The end of the book is done in such a way that it is certainly possible
that the secret of Palpatine's identity is kept for those few who don't
realize that he is the Emperor (and Sidious). Lorn thinks that Maul
escaped custody of the Jedi when the Sith turns up to kill him, and there is
no reason that the readers must know that Palpatine told him all lies, except
that the Jedi don't actually know about the Sith in The
Phantom Menace. Very
interesting...
Obi-Wan Kenobi gets a small part in this book searching for Darsha and her
master. That he doesn't recognize (or believe) the lightsaber strikes he
sees (especially the headless ones) doesn't speak well for his observation
skills. But after hearing about a cowled figure so often in this story,
he must have felt a wave of recognition on Tatooine and Naboo when he finally
saw Maul. He and Qui-Gon must have had some interesting conversations
after that.
I also enjoyed the brief journey inside the head of Darth Sidious.
When notified of Maul's failure, Sidious actually begins to doubt his
apprentice! He knows Maul is too proud, thinking tasks are below his
stature, and is very impatient. I wonder how long it takes to train a
Sith apprentice. Here, we are told about Maul's lifelong training, the
building of his lightsaber, and his indoctrination. But Sidious doesn't have
long to train Maul's replacement after The Phantom
Menace. Count Dooku
(if, in fact, he is a Sith; it's still unclear about that) is quite a bit
older by the time he was apprenticed for Attack
of the Clones.
The author seemed to know exactly what the force allows its user to
do. He makes the story much more believable, simply by getting the
characters to think about what is appropriate. Here is use of the Force,
I think, that is unparalleled in the recent expanded universe. The
characters even contemplate and reject possibilities, and tell themselves (and
thus the readers) their limitations. I appreciated Maul thinking about
his martial moves, in the Teras Kasi style (from the video game). I
thought they were a little too technical, but it was a nice acknowledgement,
since he tones it down after the first chapter. However, I do have to
wonder, like I did in the comics, why the training robots attacked him one at
a time, instead of as a group; I'm sure he would have become a better fighter
that way.
I found the book to be very easy to read. In no time, I was halfway
through. It was exciting and interesting. Although the sentence
and paragraph structure was somewhat simplistic, it was written with a passion
that was contagious! And even though many sentences were simple, I
learned some new words and needed a dictionary by my side!
As each character leaned about the Sith or the blockade of Naboo, I found
myself wondering how Maul would dispatch them. One of the commonly
quoted problems with this book is the fact that we know the ending. I
would beg to differ, because the fun of the book is figuring out how they
would get to the end. As in some other great stories, things are not as simple as they
seem to be. Bablyon 5's time
travel episode War Without End comes to mind, where we know that G'Kar will kill Londo,
but not the details and the "why". For instance, one of the most impressive parts of the book
was Darsha becoming a Jedi Master -one with the Force- even though nobody was
there to witness it and promote her. She almost defeated Maul, too.
I did find myself hoping that I wasn't investing in characters who would
end up dead at the end, though. My thoughts were that by the end, the invasion
would have occurred (which it did), the Sith apprentice revealed, and Darsha's
mission would be obsolete. So they would get to live, simply because of
timing. But unfortunately, the book didn't overlap the movie enough for
that to happen.
Yes, the book went on for far too long, with circumstances that even
stretch the term "Corellian Luck", and that border on ridiculous,
but it was really fun. Maul even gives us the exasperated attitude that
shows he knows the universe is mocking him! We the readers know it,
too. But the writing is so good, and the story so passionate, that we
don't care! Plus, the cover of this book is amazingly awesome!
Like Balance Point, this book looks good because of the really poor stuff
that came before it. Shadow Hunter was definitely better than Balance
Point, and both of those books probably deserved lower scores than I give them.
But considering the poor quality of earlier books, and the creativity and
passion that the authors show, without hitting the readers over the head with
nonsense, I think they deserve it. This author was particularly good at
giving us Star Wars trivia, but keeping it subtle. That's not an easy
thing to do, and it makes the novel much better.