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A true surprise, and a great ending to
the series. I must admit that I
was not looking forward to another novel by this author, after the
terrible writing style of the Agents of Chaos duology. However, from the
first page in, I was hooked. Sure, some of the early dialog could have
used some more fine-tuning, but that cleared up relatively quickly,
considering the length of the book. As with the Agents of chaos, the
author tries to cram in as many references to obscure things and people
as possible, but this time it's done much more subtly. I wonder if many
other people had complaints about his previous books, and he consciously
made an effort to fix things. If so, that's terrific, and I would give
his books even more chances in the future. The only real complaint I
have about the book is the expositionary method of giving information on
what has happened in the past. Even there, though, sometimes he
succeeded in making it more subtle, though the majority stood out as
obvious. Instead of taking us out of the story for paragraphs, or even
pages, the author should have given explanations as thoughts by
characters. Instead of saying "there will be a yammosk", followed by "a
yammosk was...", he could have said "Jaina remembered her first encounter
with that creature", and give it some emotional insight. Otherwise, it
feels like an afterthought.
This book felt like a trilogy of books,
joined together. The action and tension start right away, and there are
only a few places where it lets up. For the most part, everything
proceeds at a constant rate, so that the book was very even. While that
means it didn't have any great slumps, where I was dreading upcoming
pages, it also didn't have great passionate surges, where I was
breathlessly anticipating events to come, or couldn't put the book down.
There are a lot of characters, who all
get good time, and a lot of skirmishes. We get several points of view,
from the Galactic Alliance and the Yuuzhan Vong. Nom Anor returns to
Coruscant, and is promoted for his actions in
The Final Prophecy. The
closer he gets to Shimrra, however, the more he realizes that the
Supreme Overlord is quickly going insane. Shimrra seemed rather too
amicable and philosophical at the beginning, and I doubted that he would
ever feel the need to justify his actions to his people.
The Yuuzhan Vong have made some
evolutionary jumps in their biotic weapons since the last encounters. I
don't recall mention of countermeasures to the yammosk jammers,
shadow-bombs, and stutter-fire. When did those things happen, or did I
just miss that somewhere along the line? Shimrra unveils his new elite
warriors, the Slayers, who are apparently an even match for the Jedi,
though they are, as always, only as powerful as the story lets them be.
This goes for all the technology and skills. I don't see the need to
make the Yuuzhan Vong nearly all-powerful in the final book of the
series, where they must ultimately be defeated. Throughout the entire
series, the Alliance has adapted and grown more powerful. As of the last
book, they think the war will be won soon. All of a sudden, the Vong
fleets are amassed together, and the Alliance is on the verge of
annihilation. Similarly, the Jedi have found ways of killing the
warriors that make them look more like stormtroopers, so we need
Slayers. Remember how Luke and Mara almost lost their first fight
against a single warrior back in Vector Prime? Now, even Leia, an
untrained Jedi, can dispatch a group of them herself. By the end of the
book, however, even the Slayers are not much more than ordinary
warriors. It takes Luke, Jacen and Jaina a little longer to destroy
them, but it is more like the duel in Vector Prime.
The opening part of the book takes
place on a barely-known world called Selvaris, which is being used for
prisoners of war the Yuuzhan Vong take, including Pash Cracken and
Commander Page, whom I wondered about back in
The Final Prophecy. Han
and Leia rescue a prisoner who has information about a grand sacrifice
and prisoner transfer in upcoming days. The Alliance uses this to
attempt a rescue, and is half-successful. In a well-written battle, the
Millennium Falcon barely escapes, with Slayers on its tail. I wondered
why hyperspace jumps are not pre-programmed on missions like this. The
Falcon was nearly smashed to pieces because it took time to calculate
the jump. I also dislike coincidences, like Han and Leia randomly taking
up refuge at the same planet where the Vong are about to launch a major
offensive. There must have been a better way to do that. By the way, it
barely took any time to fix the Falcon there, considering it was so
badly beaten up when they arrived. It is at Caluula that I think many
fans will appreciate the return of Boba Fett, leading a pack of
Mandalorian-armored troops against the Yuuzhan Vong. It seems that he
found another job, liberator instead of bounty hunter! The author also
ties Boba in with what we know of him from
Attack of the Clones, that Fett's
grudge was against the Jedi, not Han in particular. From
The Empire
Strikes Back, I doubt that, but it's a nice sentiment, nonetheless.
In one way or another, I think the
author manages to grab characters or mention events from every single
New Jedi Order book, as well as many more, including
Tatooine Ghost,
which I haven't read yet. Cameos or even regular characters who make
appearances here include Farlander (from the Rebel Assault video games),
and Katarn (from Dark Forces games).
On Zonoma Sekot, Luke and the others
spend a lot of time weathering the effects of the unexpected hyperspace
jump from The Final Prophecy. Although they didn't know their
destination for a while, I half-expected them to land "coincidentally"
in or near Coruscant's system, but that would have required an
explanation why they weren't noticed. Thankfully, they didn't, and they
went to Coruscant with a purpose in mind. Harrar returns (I knew he
hadn't died!), and cautiously turns against his leader. Upon observing
him, Zonoma Sekot reveals that his race has been stripped of the Force,
which is why they appear to be voids. I don't recall the same effect
from Callista or
Ulic Qel Droma -they couldn't use the Force, but they
could be felt. However, maybe this being was even more powerful. While I
prefer Vergere's explanation from Traitor that they exist in another part of the
Force "spectrum", this is as good an explanation as any, except that it
begs the question of how Anakin, Jacen and Tahiri could feel them with a Vongsense. Tahiri even uses a Force-wall to affect several warriors! Why
didn't she do that against Nom Anor in the last book?
Han and Leia return to Caluula to try
and disable the yammosk there, but they don't have to, as the bioweapon
known as Alpha Red has taken care of it, killing everything related to
the Yuuzhan Vong, as well as some of the native life. One ship, though,
manages to escape, on its way to Coruscant...
The big battle that in any other book
would have been the final one takes place in the Mon Calamari system,
where the incredibly huge Yuuzhan Vong armada takes a symbolic yammosk
shape and moves inward, toward the new Capital of the Galactic Alliance
(though the politicians have been evacuated). I wonder if there was any
real reason for not jumping directly to the planet, except for dramatic
tension. The section was definitely better for the indirect route, and
it might have been intended as a demoralizer for the Alliance pilots.
Just when thing look hopeless for the Alliance, however, the fleets
mysteriously pull out. Everybody is confused... A great place for a
cliff-hanger!
The best-written section of the entire
book takes place in the aftermath of this, as Zonoma Sekot arrived near
Coruscant, causing turmoil among the Yuuzhan Vong, an uprising of Shamed
Ones, and the recall of the Vong fleet. The discussions that took place,
especially from Nom Anor's point of view, were terrific. In the lull
between storms, Leia gets a tearful reunion with her brother and
children and friends. For me, that was the highlight of the book.
The second Battle of Coruscant takes
nearly as long as the first one, depicted in Star By Star. This one,
however, is much, much less coordinated, and includes not only orbital
fights, but ground infiltration, as well. Attacking Coruscant makes
sense from a strategic point of view, in order to defeat Shimrra.
However, I disagree whole-heartedly about attacking it to regain it for
colonization. The planet's foundation should be so fragile by the end of
this war, that nobody should want to even land on it, let alone
repopulate it. The planet was hundreds of stories high -if the algae
managed to weaken upper-level buildings, it must have done the same
below, as well. I really thought they should have let the world brain
create a sort of ecological paradise, demolishing all of the buildings.
In this battle, there were so many
fronts: with attacks, retreats, counter-attacks, fallbacks, and
reinforcements. This feels like a real war, and it was quite
well-written, though I got a little tired as it dragged on toward the
end. It manages to convey the terrible price of war, without getting
bogged down in the mess that Shatterpoint was. Most of all, I liked the
way so many people could keep their senses of humor, through playful and
sarcastic banter, especially between Han and Leia.
Han and Leia's mission to Coruscant
makes a lot more sense than many others given in this series. They take
Harrar to the world brain, to try and convince it to surrender. I
thought they should have taken Jacen, as well, given that he did the
convincing anyway. It would have made more sense to have him physically
present, except that he was needed elsewhere.
Jacen has joined Luke and Jaina in
infiltrating Shimrra's palace, where they fight their way up and up to
the summit, and finally dispatch all the slayers. In an
unexpectedly quick movement, after Luke is poisoned by Shimrra's
amphistaff, he kills the Supreme Overlord! However, the real power
behind the throne was the Shamed One Onimi, who controlled Shimrra from
the start, having grafted yammosk cells into his genetic structure
before he became a Shamed One. I wondered why the truth about Shimrra's ascent to the throne
would be cause for discontent, as it seemed very Yuuzhan Vong to me.
However, given Onimi's secret involvement, there might have been
something strange about it. I thought Shimrra seemed less powerful here
than usual, especially in his dealings with other Yuuzhan Vong, but it
might have been Onimi's distraction that caused this. I also wondered
how much Onimi knew about Nom Anor's secret; the way he kept
scrutinizing Nom Anor indicated that he knew something was going on.
Although both Shimrra and Onimi were going crazy, a fact that I lamented
because I wanted a strong enemy defeated by the good guys, rather than destroying themselves, I am very glad that they put in this
twist about Shimrra simply being a puppet. I was afraid they would rip
off The Last Command by having Onimi kill the Supreme Overlord.
But it was not Luke who killed Onimi,
but Jacen, going beyond his abilities for likely the only time in his
life, becoming perfectly attuned to the Force. As he says, he will spend
his entire life trying to get back to that state. With the Supreme
Overlord (both of them) dead, the Yuuzhan Vong battle fleet around
Coruscant surrenders. This was done in a very credible manner,
specifically through Nas Choka's thoughts: if the gods abandoned them
and let their leader die, it is no longer worth dying a glorious death
to attain the afterlife. Devoid of the gods, what good is the afterlife?
I wonder about the Jedi agreeing with throwing all Yuuzhan Vong ships
and technology into the sun, however, as it is all living, and would
therefore be against their principles.
Nom Anor is also killed, though there
is a slight chance that he survived, and that we'll see him again. His
story in this book was dizzying, as he changed sides so many times. He
went from disgrace to Prefect of Yuuzhan'tar, then joined the Shamed
Ones to try and calm their revolt, only to return to the Citadel and
watch the Shamed Ones rise up and ruin the battle sacrifice. When it is
obvious that the Sacred sector is to be overrun, and that he can't stand
the insane Shimrra any longer, he finally joins the Shamed Ones as the
Prophet again, leading them in their fight. Of course, then he meets up
with Tahiri and Mara, once again. Although he ultimately proved useful
in the end, I think they could have done without him, because I was
anticipating a terrific end by duel, with Mara justly killing him. Alas,
it was not to be. I don't understand why Mara spared his life. Killing
him, even in cold blood, would have been less of a Dark Side act than
the beating she gave him. It's a wonder he could even move after that,
let alone walk to the world brain and climb the Citadel. In the end,
after trying one last time to kill Han, Leia, Jacen and Jaina in Onimi's
dying escape pod, he decides to stay on board, thus taking his own life.
Yet I wonder if there might have been another escape pod somewhere,
because we don't actually see his death...
And what role does the much-hyped
Zonama Sekot play in the end? It gives the Jedi some cool and sleek
ships, though it is not clear if they get to keep them after the war. It
is also the target of Alpha Red, not from the Alliance, but from the
single ship that escaped Caluula. They manage to hold the ship back, and
Sekot fashions some creatures that force the Vong coralskippers to the
ground, where it welcomes them "home". I loved, and had to laugh out
loud, at the way the amphistaffs and villips took to the ground and
became snakes and fruit! The end of the Yuuzhan Vong happened almost
exactly how I expected it to. Sekot turns out to be the offspring of
Yuuzhan'tar, which I believe the Vong must have destroyed after being
stripped of the Force by that entity. Since Onimi was able to recover
the Force, I'm sure the rest of the species can do so in a few
generations. I just hope we don't see a Yuuzhan Vong Jedi in the next
five years.
I have serious doubts about Sekot's
ability to house all the remaining Yuuzhan Vong, however. They arrived
in several worldships, and even given the number that died in battle,
there must be more than enough to fill several worlds. Ignoring that, it
makes a lot of sense to exile them on the living world. It gets them out
of sight of the citizens of the galaxy, who would be hard pressed to
keep their rage in check after all the destruction the Vong unleashed,
especially Duros, Ithorians, and the Hutts, among many others. It's
better to get them into an unknown sector of space -except that it isn't
completely unknown. The Jedi, and probably the military (given the
last
book) know where Sekot is located, so retribution could occur at any
time.
Several Jedi are also staying with
Sekot, which given its Force sensitivity is no great surprise. But after
Tahiri literally begged Corran to be her Jedi Master in the last book,
it is very disappointing to see her leave now, especially without any
acknowledgement to him.
After an already-overlong review, I
want to comment on a couple of things that struck me about the New Jedi
Order series while reading this book. One of the largest problems I had
during the ground battle for Coruscant was a lack of empathy for the
Yuuzhan Vong. We got to know the warriors and politicians, and a little
about the religious caste, but absolutely nothing about "civilians". I
was under the impression that there were no Yuuzhan Vong civilians, but
that is obviously not true. They obviously don't subscribe to the
philosophy of pain, either, to be screaming and running through the
streets, searching for loved ones. What is a loved one to a Yuuzhan
Vong? What are personal items and keepsakes? I think we should have had
a couple of paperback novels on the civilians.
I wish Shimrra's war against the gods,
and the item of his ascendance to the throne, would have been addressed
much earlier in the series. We heard about Quoreal for the very first
time in The Final Prophecy, so we didn't know that there was an
underground movement still loyal to the former Supreme Overlord. It
could have been stretched out a little more, instead of suddenly
appearing at the end.
Somebody mentioned that the New Jedi
Order needed some more lasting romantic relationships, and I tend to
agree. The focus was very much on the war, with barely-there
relationships between Jaina and Jag, and Jacen and Danni. The other
relationships, like Lando and Tendra, Wedge and Iella, Luke and Mara and
so on, were already more-or-less established before the series,
especially in Union. It would
have been nice to see a lasting and permanent relationship come to
fruition in this four-plus year arc.
Finally, I liked the Force arc in the
last half of the series, though it could have been much better. We saw
Luke reinstate the Padawan-Master system, only to have it break fatally
apart early in the war. Now, the Jedi are transcending their role from
the Old Republic. They will no longer be a police force, though they
will champion "the will of the Force". The Will of the Force cropped up
a lot in the last book. It has been used in other places, such as when
some of the Jedi arrived in certain places without knowing why in the
comics Darkness, or
Rite of Passage, and Qui-Gon certainly believed that
the Force had a Will of its own back in
The Phantom Menace. It is not an idea that I like to
embrace, for it implies a lack of personality and individual. The fact
that people can still turn to the Dark Side, however, at least offers
the chance of clinging to individuality.
As for the future, I think there are
still a lot of unexplored loose ends that authors could pick up and
craft stories around. I still hope to see Raynar and the Dark Jedi from
Star By Star, for one particular example.
This book, however, was a grand
conclusion to the New Jedi Order series. For the most part, it was well
written, and formed a very steady story, which is worth mentioning
because of the contrast to the author's other Star Wars novels, the
Hero's Trial and Jedi Eclipse. There remain some implausibilities, which
all Star Wars novels contain, and some of the dialog and recaps could
have used a little work, but those are minor considering the scope and
grandeur of the rest of the book. The author even got a second chance to
give us a memorial for Chewbacca. This one was outstanding, simple, and
gives us a sort of King Arthur "Sword in the Stone" with Anakin Solo's
lightsaber embedded within the wooden sculpture of Chewie. This was
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