I was intrigued by the magical journey into this land, and the way that
the main character was treated, as an enemy, then an outsider, then as a
reluctant ally. The magical jewel could have been a terrific talisman,
as it healed, warned and guided. Unfortunately, it also put the main
character under a spell, giving her a compulsion to go to a specific
location at a specific time, with no explanation. To me, that’s not
magic- it’s a cheat, though that might have been more common back when
this book was written. It detracted from the story, as did the way the
final battle was fought beyond mortal vision.
Spoiler review:
When the book started, I immediately thought of Outlander, but the ring
of ancient stones forming a magical gate is the end of that similarity.
While chasing a hunter intent on killing a predatory wildcat, Kelsie (or
sometimes Kelsay, depending on where we are in the book), gets between
them as the wildcat enters the ring, and Kelsie follows. She leaves her
modern world, and the hunter, behind, and is transported to another
place, another time.
She’s immediately set upon by an unknown
hunter on a horse and his evil-looking hound. When they leave, she
wanders around, and the wildcat gives birth. Kelsie finds a dying woman
and her dead escort. The woman gives her an amulet as well as some words
that seem to activate it. Scared, she returns to the circle of stones,
in time to see the hunter return.
Eventually, Kelsie is rescued
by some villagers, which reminds me a lot of the much more recent
The
Auriga Project, as she’s taken in and shown the local customs. The women
don’t like her, while the men are more lenient –the only important one
is Yonan. The village also hosts another man who seems to have come from
our world (or is it their future?), Simon Tregarth. I wonder if he
features in other Witchworld stories. He tells her that the gates only
work one way, and that she is destined to help save them from the
darkness.
There don’t seem to be many other villages in Escarp,
as this one is surrounded by the forces of Darkness, which the warriors
go out and fight every day. It also hosts a remaining Witch of Escarp,
Wittle, who is livid that Kelsie has a witch’s stone without getting witch
training. But it seems the stone chose Kelsie, as she gains some
knowledge of limited spells, and wakes the stone up. She experiences
flashbacks to the life of Roylane, the witch who gave her the stone, and
the mission she was sent on, to find the place where they could renew
their power.
In fact, it was the cat who took the jewel from
Roylane and saved them from the dark rider and its hound, but the
villagers won’t accept that at first. A couple of days later, the stone
gets a mind of its own, putting Kelsie under a gaes that forces her to
take up Roylane’s quest. Wittle refuses to help, but follows her as the
stone nearly pulls Kelsie by the neck, over the mountains and by the
river path.
Together, you’d think Kelsie would learn more about
this land and its people, how it came to ruin, and so on, but all we get
is a bit of arguing and a lot of wondering by Kelsie. The story was
starting to drag to a halt until Yonan shows up. We last saw him in
Trey
of Swords, where he was under a gaes to fight an ancient battle against
evil. I think he still has the last sword he obtained in that book.
They follow the jewel, and end up falling into a pit as the ground
collapses, and they are captured by the Thas, the evil minions from Trey
of Swords. Kelsie uses the jewel, and Yonan uses the butt of his sword
to escape, until they issue from the caves into a swamp. At the exit, a
being of dark power confronts them, confusing Yonan for its old enemy
reborn, but together they are too strong for him.
Yonan finds a
magical portal that takes them away from the swamp, where they are being
hunted. Escaping that deteriorating magical house of walls without
doors, they encounter Wittle again, who huffs and puffs at seeing Yonan,
still unable to accept that he has magic. I wonder what the Witches were
like in their full glory, the way they destroyed their lands to save
them from the armies that contested the area. Unfortunately, these
stories don’t give me any desire to go back and check out other
Witchworld books.
They pass through a forest of trees that throw
darts, lines of trees that have eyes that the Darkness can see through,
and finally the mouth of a giant cave in the shape of death itself.
There they are put under another spell, and lose themselves as if to
poison and something that erodes their minds. Kelsie almost loses the
jewel, but thanks to Yonan –I’m not sure how he escaped- she manages to
get free. They climb up the exterior of the head-like cave and jump
down, surviving.
The jewel takes them farther and farther into
the middle of nowhere, down the continuing lines of trees, until they are ambushed at a
ravine.
This is where the jewel has been leading them, as they
see a miniature of the Escarp region far below. And inside that,
another, and another, like a hall of mirrors. Instinctively, Wittle and
Kelsie join their jewels and the jewels do the rest of the work,
repelling the darkness into the mountains and beyond. Yonan is
physically attacked, presumably just to keep him in the action, and he
is seriously injured.
Meanwhile, Wittle whispers spells to try
and help defeat the darkness, losing herself in the process. Eventually,
she jumps over the edge. I half-expected to see her body fall to the
ground from above them. It seems like by purging the lands far below of
darkness, that they were also helping their lands, as if the different
lands were all one. Yonan and Kelsie prove this by jumping into the
ravine themselves, and ending up back at the village –because Yonan was
too injured to walk, and the wildcat mysteriously appears giving them
the way forward.
The jewels have disappeared, as has Wittle,
presumably having completed her mission. Kelsie is given the chance to
leave Escarp, but thinks of the wildcat and that there is nothing left
for her in Scotland, so she decides to stay.
I’m never a fan of
people being under compulsions to do things, nor when they blindly
follow what must be done for the sake of the story, which in this case
was wasn’t much of a story. I liked the magical aspects more, and their
confrontation with the more intelligent beings rather than the Thas.
Unfortunately, I have no compulsion of my own to continue reading these
stories, as they are not well-formed and lack any real magic or even a
compelling story. I’ve completed this trilogy of books, and plan to stop
there.